July 2011
2 posts
Plot points. Character Developments.
Main guy:
Cale - Burns, Cale - Edinburough, Cale Edin, Cale Edinburrow, Cale Smith, Cale Alden need a last name
CALE DUNCAN; “thin, slender” “fortress”
CALE DUNSTAN; “thin, slender” “strong, fortress”
Cale Haynsworth;
Heritage; Irish/Gaelic
means “thin, slender”
fair skin, green eyes.
I'm going to start writing again
The RIGHT way.
first off- character development. I desperately need it. I don’t know my characters. not inside out. i dont even know their birthdays. i need to learn all about them before I can continue to write the story.
February 2010
5 posts
*contains plot spoilers*
BE WARNED THAT THE FOLLOWING CONTAINS PART OF THE OVERALL PLOT OF THE STORY.
Someone asked me how Dark angels in my story came to exist. I knew the answer obviously as it was a pivotal part of my story. I’m willing to answer it, and have simplified it as much as possible as to not give away anything important. But here is the history of how Dark angels came to be:
A Light angel, Alayna,...
Chapter Four.
Cale checked the direction sheet tucked into the dashboard of his car for the fifteenth time in less than a minute. After getting home from work he recieved a phone call from Gem asking him to meet her at her apartment tonight, he quickly printed out the directions to the address she gave and hopped into his POS car. Although… now he wasn’t sure if he had gotten the right address. He was in a...
Chapter Three.
Gem dropped her keys on the side table next to her apartment door and slipped off her shoes. It had been a long day and was in no way winding down. She’d spent most of it at her job in the bookstore downtown, and now she had to pay a visit to the Common. She’d been avoiding the Council for as long as she could but she couldn’t wait much longer.
Dark angels were supposed to report to the Council...
Chapter Two.
Cale shook his head as he slid the balcony door shut in his apartment. Gem had just been here and had shown him something that had blown his mind. He thought about how for a split second he was terrified as he leaned over the edge, but didn’t see her. Confused he wanted to rush back into the house and call 911. No one could have survived that jump.
Seconds later he spotted her on the horizon, and...
Chapter One.
Gem arched her back as the cold gust of wind hit her neck, causing goose bumps to rise along her ivory skin. Closing her eyes she felt her hair dance wildly with the rough wind behind her as her strong inky black wings pulsed up and down, keeping her at a steady pace. Down below, the lights of the buildings twinkled like bright stars in an otherwise dark sky. She loved the feeling of flying; it...